Charon: Illustration

Here's my first attempt at producing the main illustration for my Time Tales entry. 

I'm quite happy with the results for a first try..I think the colours work well together..

I think there are a few things I might need to change for the final image..

Hopefully I'll be able to get some feedback from this and decide whether to add more panels to create more of a storyboard type illustration.

(Click on the image above to enlarge but if there is any copying I will smack you down)